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Unidentified Advanced Recon Force trooper[]
- Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 23:00, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 15:25, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 364 words (61 introduction, 258 body, 45 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 339 words (58 introduction, 237 body, 44 behind the scenes)
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Support[]
- —spookywillowwtalk 19:28, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- Lewisr (talk) 19:41, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- Xd1358 (Talk) 18:11, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
- Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:53, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
- Booply (talk) 15:21, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
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Lew[]
Kamino as a homeworld is infobox exclusiveLewisr (talk) 21:15, 23 June 2024 (UTC)The 20 BBY date is infobox exclusive, so should be added into the intro and bodyLewisr (talk) 21:15, 23 June 2024 (UTC)Can you find a way to include Umbara in the body?Lewisr (talk) 21:15, 23 June 2024 (UTC)For this caption for the top quote 'The clone, while mounting his AT-RT' does the 'his' need to be changed?Lewisr (talk) 21:18, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
spookly[]
"called out to alert the men"—it's been a bit since I've watched this episode offhand, but does it confirm that the rest of the troopers called out to were men elsewhere in the ep? (or in an ep gallery or somewhere else.) I'm assuming the warning is the top quote used on the page, but figured I'd ask since it doesnt have it present in.—spookywillowwtalk 22:34, 24 June 2024 (UTC)- I've checked and yes, they are referred to as the men several times throughout. The warning is indeed the top quote. I guess does that mean I should be adding male here? Wok142 (talk) 18:13, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
- If it's ever used just generally aimed at this trooper then yeah. Though if the trooper themselves is only calling their colleagues men then wouldn't be (haven't checked though so).—spookywillowwtalk 17:21, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- Anakin, Rex, Krell, etc. all call the troopers men. Would it technically matter if that occurs before or after the trooper dies? Wok142 (talk) 18:46, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- It matters on the context. If it's like "the men we traveled here with" then it'd suit since the trooper here traveled to Umbara and then died. But if it's "let's go, men!" or similar after the trooper is dead, then wouldn't be enough to use it in that scene before its used in the article since technically there could be a non-male clone who also dies and then once they've passed, then whomever uses the term men. Small semantics, I know.—spookywillowwtalk 02:04, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- Anakin says "We'll need to move out as soon as the men are ready" shortly before the trooper dies so I'm gonna add it. Wok142 (talk) 02:43, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- Yep, makes sense if before.—spookywillowwtalk 19:28, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- Anakin says "We'll need to move out as soon as the men are ready" shortly before the trooper dies so I'm gonna add it. Wok142 (talk) 02:43, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- It matters on the context. If it's like "the men we traveled here with" then it'd suit since the trooper here traveled to Umbara and then died. But if it's "let's go, men!" or similar after the trooper is dead, then wouldn't be enough to use it in that scene before its used in the article since technically there could be a non-male clone who also dies and then once they've passed, then whomever uses the term men. Small semantics, I know.—spookywillowwtalk 02:04, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- Anakin, Rex, Krell, etc. all call the troopers men. Would it technically matter if that occurs before or after the trooper dies? Wok142 (talk) 18:46, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- If it's ever used just generally aimed at this trooper then yeah. Though if the trooper themselves is only calling their colleagues men then wouldn't be (haven't checked though so).—spookywillowwtalk 17:21, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- I've checked and yes, they are referred to as the men several times throughout. The warning is indeed the top quote. I guess does that mean I should be adding male here? Wok142 (talk) 18:13, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Ecks[]
"As their forces regrouped and rested, members of the Umbaran Militia, who were allied with the Separatists, sneaked up behind them to launch a surprise attack." Whose forces regrouped and rested? I believe you're referring to the Republic forces, but the way this is worded makes it sound like it could be the Umbaran forces."The trooper, who was crouched next to their walker behind the trench where most of their forces were located, called out to alert the men before mounting the walker." Same issue here. Whose walker? The clone's? The Republic's? The Umbarans'?Xd1358 (Talk) 18:41, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:24, 18 July 2024 (UTC)