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Lanna[]
- Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 03:05, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: FACPOV:ROTJ had so many wonderful queer stories
- Date Archived: 01:08, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 941 words (124 introduction, 757 body, 60 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 971 words (124 introduction, 816 body, 31 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS, WP:PRIDE, WP:WOMEN
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
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Support[]
- —spookywillowwtalk 03:59, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- Lewisr (talk) 05:14, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- I really need to get around to properly reading this book Zed42 (talk) 23:38, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
- Booply (talk) 23:53, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 01:08, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
Object[]
spookly[]
It tends to be precedent for when a piece of IU info is sourced to OOU that we also state like 'On Twitter... so and so revealed [x].' Or whatnot similar.—spookywillowwtalk 01:56, 30 March 2024 (UTC)- Added. Different tweet than the other ref cause I was using that one to avoid a double ref, as it confirms both Lanna and Karie's genders. Panther436 (talk) 04:12, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- Just curious, are you opposed to making the ref now used in the BtS the gender ref for the infobox and for the PT ref? I see that the other one is needed for the biography's mention of 'women' while referring to both; but optimally the PT and infobox would match the BtS since the BtS now states that's where it was revealed.—spookywillowwtalk 04:19, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- I liked it consistent throughout the body but that's perfectly fine, swapped around. Panther436 (talk) 04:39, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- Just curious, are you opposed to making the ref now used in the BtS the gender ref for the infobox and for the PT ref? I see that the other one is needed for the biography's mention of 'women' while referring to both; but optimally the PT and infobox would match the BtS since the BtS now states that's where it was revealed.—spookywillowwtalk 04:19, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- Added. Different tweet than the other ref cause I was using that one to avoid a double ref, as it confirms both Lanna and Karie's genders. Panther436 (talk) 04:12, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
I realize this is an incredibly vague objection, but I think a lot of the "Unshared feelings" section is pretty play-by-play in that it includes a lot of direct recounting of dialogue. Of course, a lot of that can be kept, but I'd like to see a pass made through to focus more on actions and summarizing rather than prosifying each line. A similar objection where I've explained more about what play-by-play generally means when I'm phrasing it like this can be found here, though happy to elaborate further if needed.- Always figured I'd get this objection again someday if I wasn't careful. Hopefully it's better now :) Panther436 (talk) 07:10, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- Yep, thanks.—spookywillowwtalk 03:59, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- Always figured I'd get this objection again someday if I wasn't careful. Hopefully it's better now :) Panther436 (talk) 07:10, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- (Review note) I'm assuming the above tinkering will tow it back under, but this is currently reading with the bot as 1001 words.—spookywillowwtalk 05:20, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
Zed[]
Galactic Empire should be mentioned (and linked) wherever you think fits in the body, since right now its only context is the Imperial attacks on the Home One.Zed42 (talk) 22:42, 7 April 2024 (UTC)- Added Panther436 (talk) 22:56, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
Comments[]
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:08, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
- Stowing these here for reference's logging sake 1 , 2.—spookywillowwtalk 01:56, 30 March 2024 (UTC)