Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kantiema

Kantiema[]

Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 20:02, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Word count at nomination time: 296 words (48 introduction, 217 body, 31 behind the scenes)
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~~I think the events should be presented in a more chronological order, with Sabé rescuing the refugees and her message to Tambor being a ploy being mentioned before the bombing.~~ Zed42 ^(talk) 12:44, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Is that satisfactory? Wok142 (talk) 22:15, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
I feel the last sentence of the Description can be worked into the start of History (and History can probably be split into two paragraphs).
- Split. Wok142 (talk) 00:10, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
Could do with a quote in the History section, there are a couple other mentions of the village/its destruction that could be used.
- Went with the one of Sabe mentioning the refugees there. Wok142 (talk) 00:10, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
A couple small details from the comic that I think are also relevant: Sabé mentions the refugees were being held in Imperial custody; also, Tambor asks how many refugees are supposedly there before deciding to destroy the village when he learns there are 12. Zed42 ^(talk) 12:54, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
- Good shout, I've added these details in. Wok142 (talk) 00:10, 28 July 2024 (UTC)