Corvis[]

• Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 18:26, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Word count at nomination time: 294 words (44 introduction, 200 body, 50 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

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Support[]

1. Outer Shell Electrons (talk) 21:16, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

Object[]

Thrawn[]

• Homeworld is infobox exclusive. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 19:10, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Wok142 (talk) 22:48, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

ecks[]

• Is there any downside to cropping the infobox image a bit more vertically? You could probably get rid of like 90% of the empty bubble.
• Two of the three intro sentences have their main clause start with "Corvus flew", could you please reword for some variation?
• Review note: "towards" is informal, "toward" is formal writing. I've corrected the instances in this article but keep this in mind for the future.
• The two last sentences of the bio both involve clones making their way "toward the city", some rewriting is needed here to avoid repetition. Xd1358 ^(Talk) 18:49, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Should be all corrected. Wok142 (talk) 21:56, 26 July 2024 (UTC)

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