Trymant IV[]

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 02:46, 7 February 2024 (UTC) Lewisr (talk) 02:48, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Trymant, my child. Writing this in a week-long binge session was hella fun.—spookywilloww^talk Always a pleasure to be collabing on these big pages, especially THR! Lewisr (talk) 02:48, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
• Word count at nomination time: 4521 words (391 introduction, 3777 body, 353 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:THRWP:ASTWP:COMICSWP:NOVELS

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Support[]

Superb work on this. Would love to see more. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:10, 8 March 2024 (UTC) (Vote struck per policy: Banned user -- —spookywilloww^talk 17:37, 26 May 2024 (UTC))

1. The Adventures comic was my first introduction to the Nihil, and for some reason I had thought for the longest time while reading the novels that the spider ship was the Gaze Electric XD OOM 224 (he/him/they) 13:58, 22 July 2024 (UTC)

Object[]

ThrawnChiss7[]

• I'm pretty sure that only the first use of 232 BBY should be linked in the infobox. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 02:53, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Removed the other links Lewisr (talk) 02:58, 7 February 2024 (UTC)

Uber[]

• If I recall correctly, the Legacy Run wasn't exactly "attacked," it was a collision planned by Ro. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:34, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Slightly tweaked, does that work? Didn't need an extra cite since Timelines mentions that Ro takes credit for the Disaster Lewisr (talk) 04:04, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
• Precedent is to note what the planet looked like from orbit (e.g. Trigalis, Chorin). UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:14, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Added.—spookywilloww^talk 03:55, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
• "Jedi Knight Vernestra Rwoh reviewed the files of the Trymant IV disaster. Rwoh felt that the attack in the Trymant system did not match the marauders' standard raid patterns, similar to the ones she had encountered on Wevo" This is a little confusing to follow. Are the patterns on Wevo similar to the ones on Trymant?
  • Tweaked.—spookywilloww^talk 03:55, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
• I'm noticing a lot of play-by-play and somewhat-irrelevant details throughout the article. Take, for example, the section "Homesick blues," much of it goes into detail about character interactions that 1.) do not take place on Trymant 2.) do not fall under the general scope of a planet article and 3.) don't even mention Trymant to begin with. Generally speaking, character thoughts and feelings aren't really relevant to a planet's history if they don't directly concern it to begin with. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:30, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Gave it a decent haircut; I think most of the rest can be justified in some form though, Trymant itself is mentioned a lot narratively, and most points make the later aspects of the article seem a bit more contextualized.—spookywilloww^talk 03:55, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
• You now have two consecutive images aligned to the same side (after "Impending doom"). I honestly think there should only be one image under "Search for safety." UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:45, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Good point, removed one.—spookywilloww^talk 00:59, 8 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments[]

• Also a sidenote that yes, the infobox is cursed. But combinably with RTCT content and the author stating it was intentional that the planet was super dead, it's safe to say that all (aboveground) brushery and trees were zapped.—spookywilloww^talk 02:50, 7 February 2024 (UTC)
• Continue from "Idyllic refuge." UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:34, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Ecological effects. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:10, 26 February 2024 (UTC)