Comet (clone trooper)[]

• Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 07:41, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First FAN, wish me luck
• Word count at nomination time: 1485 words (185 introduction, 1258 body, 42 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

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• Kind of a preference on my end but I think it'd be good to slap some dates in the intro.
• The Clone Wars gets more context in the intro than it does in the bio (same with detail on the Separatists' name). Can that be fixed please? Might be worth having that in the creation section.
• Vanqor needs context in the intro. Zygerria and Lothal need context in the bio.
• Might be worth introducing Oba Diah moon a lil better so that there's no confusion as to whether Oba Diah is the moon itself, like it's introduced in the intro.
  • All addressed. Wok142 (talk) 16:42, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
• I get why height is translated to all clones from a single source but weight feels a lil more arbitrary since it's all depending on diet, activity etc. If that's a precedent I'm strongly against it as it seems way to assumptive. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 14:49, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
  • According to lew, this is precedent, but you raise some good points. I'm leaving it for now because it's precedent, but I would be down to potentially change that. Wok142 (talk) 16:42, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
• Can Nexus also get some context in the intro please? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:50, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Certainly. Wok142 (talk) 00:06, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

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