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@@ -39,10 +39,7 @@ <h2>Introduction</h2>
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 			<p>What’s new in this version of WCAG 3?</p>
-			<p>This draft includes an updated the list of the potential outcomes which we are exploring. The list of outcomes is longer thn a listing of Success Criteria list in WCAG 2.2 because the intent at this stage is to be as inclusive as possible of potential outcomes. The final version of WCAG 3 will not include all of these outcomes. We also expect changes and clarifications of Outcomes such as:
-				<ul><li>The text of the Outcomes will change the text listed in this version, and</li>
-					<li>Only some of the Outcomes will be required to meet the base level of conformance. </li>
-				</ul>
+			<p>This draft includes an updated the list of the potential outcomes which we are exploring. The list of outcomes is longer thn a listing of Success Criteria list in WCAG 2.2 because the intent at this stage is to be as inclusive as possible of potential outcomes. The final version of WCAG 3 will change. Some outcomes may be added and some may be removed. We also expect changes to the text of the Outcomes. Only some of the Outcomes will be required at the base level of conformance.</p>
 
 			<p>The purpose of publishing this initial list is to:
 			<ul><li> better understand the scope of needs, </li>
@@ -107,7 +104,9 @@ <h2>Guidelines</h2>
 			<ul><li>What outcomes are needed to make web content accessible and are missing from this list?</li>
 				<li>What research supports or refutes these outcomes?</li>
 				<li>Are outcomes listed here out of the scope of accessibility guidance and why?</li>
-			</ul>
+			</ul></p>
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+			<p>To provide feedback, please file a <a href="https://github.com/w3c/wcag3/issues">GitHub issue</a> or send email to <a href="mailto:public-agwg-comments@w3.org?subject=WCAG%203.0%20public%20comment">public-agwg-comments@w3.org</a> (<a href="https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-agwg-comments/">comment archive</a>). </p>
 
 			<p id="additional_research"><strong>Additional Research</strong></p>
 			<p>One goal of publishing this list is to identify gaps in current research and request assistance filling those gaps.</p>