addressing ChrisNs recommendations

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@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ <h3>
           <li id=affection>Be aware that displays of affection may complicate professional
           relationships. For some people, overtly friendly disposition
           towards another participant involving body contact (e.g., hugging,
-          touching on the arm or shoulder, or kissing) can be, or be 
+          touching on the arm or shoulder, or kissing) can be 
           an invasion of personal space, or perceived as an <a>unwelcome advance</a>.
           </li>
           <li id=eliminate-bias>Work to eliminate your own biases, <a>prejudices</a>, and discriminatory
@@ -291,27 +291,27 @@ <h3 id="unacceptablebehavior">
             is not limited to, various common methods of engaging in bad
             faith discourse such as:
             <ul>
-              <li id=concern-trolling><dfn class="lint-ignore">concern trolling</dfn>: disingenuously
+              <li id=concern-trolling>disingenuously
               expressing concern in order to undermine or derail a
-              discussion. <cite><a href=
-              "https://geekfeminism.wikia.org/wiki/Concern_troll">Geek
+              discussion; also known as <dfn class="lint-ignore">concern trolling</dfn>. 
+              <cite><a href="https://geekfeminism.wikia.org/wiki/Concern_troll">Geek
               Feminism Wiki</a></cite>
               </li>
-              <li id=sealioning><dfn class="lint-ignore">sealioning</dfn>: asking numerous questions about
+              <li id=sealioning>asking numerous questions about
               basic concepts in an attempt to derail discussion, to
               stifle participation, or to provoke a critical response in
-              order to appear a victim. <cite><a href=
+              order to appear a victim; also known as <dfn class="lint-ignore">sealioning</dfn>. <cite><a href=
               "https://rationalwiki.org/wiki/Just_asking_questions#Sealioning">
               RationalWiki</a></cite>
               </li>
-              <li id=gish-galloping><dfn class="lint-ignore">Gish Galloping</dfn>: overwhelming a debate with
+              <li id=gish-galloping>overwhelming a debate with
               many weak arguments in an attempt to cause others to waste
-              time refuting them.
+              time refuting them; also known as <dfn class="lint-ignore">Gish Galloping</dfn>.
               <cite><a href="https://rationalwiki.org/wiki/Gish_Gallop"
               >RationalWiki</a></cite>
               </li>
-              <li id=ad-nauseam><dfn class="lint-ignore" lang="la">argumentum ad nauseam</dfn>: repeatedly
-              making claims already shown to be false. <cite><a
+              <li id=ad-nauseam>repeatedly making claims already shown to be false; 
+              also known as <dfn class="lint-ignore" lang="la">argumentum ad nauseam</dfn>. <cite><a
               href="https://rationalwiki.org/wiki/Argumentum_ad_nauseam"
               >RationalWiki</a></cite>
               </li>
@@ -332,12 +332,12 @@ <h3 id="unacceptablebehavior">
             Continued one-on-one communication after request to stop.
           </li>
           <li id=outing>
-            Deliberate outing of any aspect of a person’s <a>gender
+            Deliberate disclosure of any aspect of a person’s <a>gender
             identity</a>, <a>sexuality</a>, disability, or any other 
             personal attributes without their <a>consent</a>.
           </li>
           <li id=publishing-private-comm>
-            Publication of non-harassing private communication without
+            Disclosure or publication of non-harassing private communication without
             <a>consent</a> by the involved parties.
           </li>
           <li id=dog-whistles>
@@ -501,11 +501,14 @@ <h2>
         </li>
       </ol>
       <p>
-        Alice: “Yeah I used X and it was really crazy!” Eve: “Hey, could you
-        not use that word? What about ‘ridiculous’ instead?” Alice: “oh sorry,
-        sure.” -&gt; edits old message to say “Yeah I used X and it was really
-        confusing!”
+        For example:
       </p>
+<pre>
+  Alice: “Yeah I used X and it was really crazy!” 
+  Eve: “Hey, could you not use that word? What about ‘ridiculous’ instead?” 
+  Alice: “oh sorry, sure.” 
+  Alice edits message to say “Yeah I used X and it was really confusing!”
+</pre>
       <p>
         This will allow conversation to quickly continue without any need of
         further action or escalating the situation.