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@@ -276,14 +276,20 @@ <h3 id="unacceptablebehavior">
           </li>
           <li id=personal-attacks>Personal attacks.
           </li>
-          <li id=stalking>Stalking or physically following or invading someone's personal space after a request to stop.</li>
-          <li id=disease>Exposing others to contagious disease.</li>
-          <li id=photo><a>Harassing</a> photography or recording, including logging online
+          <li id=stalking>
+            Stalking or physically following or invading someone's personal space after a request to stop.
+          </li>
+          <li id=disease>
+            Deliberately exposing others to contagious disease.
+          </li>
+          <li id=photo>
+            <a>Harassing</a> photography or recording, including logging online
             activity for <a>harassment</a> purposes.
           </li>
-          <li id=disruption>Sustained disruption of discussion. This may include, but
-          is not limited to, various common methods of engaging in bad
-          faith discourse such as:
+          <li id=disruption>
+            Sustained disruption of discussion. This may include, but
+            is not limited to, various common methods of engaging in bad
+            faith discourse such as:
             <ul>
               <li id=concern-trolling><dfn class="lint-ignore">concern trolling</dfn>: disingenuously
               expressing concern in order to undermine or derail a
@@ -315,21 +321,28 @@ <h3 id="unacceptablebehavior">
               </li>
             </ul>
           </li>
-          <li id=sexual-attention><a>Unwelcome sexual attention</a>.
+          <li id=sexual-attention>
+            <a>Unwelcome sexual attention</a>.
           </li>
-          <li id=inappropriate-contact>Patterns of inappropriate social contact, such as
+          <li id=inappropriate-contact>
+            Patterns of inappropriate social contact, such as
           requesting/assuming inappropriate levels of intimacy with others.
           </li>
-          <li id=stop>Continued one-on-one communication after request to stop.
+          <li id=stop>
+            Continued one-on-one communication after request to stop.
           </li>
-          <li id=gender-outing>Deliberate outing of any aspect of a person’s <a>gender
-          identity</a> without their <a>consent</a>.
+          <li id=outing>
+            Deliberate outing of any aspect of a person’s <a>gender
+            identity</a>, <a>sexuality</a>, disability, or any other 
+            personal attributes without their <a>consent</a>.
           </li>
-          <li id=publishing-private-comm>Publication of non-harassing private communication without
-          <a>consent</a> by the involved parties.
+          <li id=publishing-private-comm>
+            Publication of non-harassing private communication without
+            <a>consent</a> by the involved parties.
           </li>
-          <li id=dog-whistles>Use of coded language (also known as "dog whistles") used to
-          rally support for hate groups or to intimidate vulnerable groups.
+          <li id=dog-whistles>
+            Use of coded language (also known as "dog whistles") used to
+            rally support for hate groups or to intimidate vulnerable groups.
           </li>
           <li id=patronizing><a>Patronizing</a> language or behavior:
             <ul>
@@ -359,13 +372,14 @@ <h3 id="unacceptablebehavior">
               </li>
             </ul>
           </li>
-          <li id=retaliation>Retaliating, or taking adverse action, against anyone who files a complaint that someone has
-          violated this Code of Conduct.
+          <li id=retaliation>
+            Retaliating, or taking adverse action, against anyone who files a complaint that someone has
+            violated this Code of Conduct.
           </li>
         </ol>
-	  </section>
-	      <section>
-	<h3>Safety versus Comfort</h3>
+	    </section>
+	    <section>
+	    <h3>Safety versus Comfort</h3>
         <p>This Code prioritizes the safety of individuals, particularly those in marginalized communities, over the comfort of others. For example, the following behaviors are presumed to be acceptable even if they make some participants uncomfortable:</p>
         <ul>
           <li id=setting-boundaries>Reasonable communication of boundaries, such as “leave me alone,”
@@ -403,7 +417,7 @@ <h2>
         address the issue.
       </p>
       <p>
-	You are welcome to raise issues directly with the <a>Ombudspeople</a> as a <a href=
+	      You are welcome to raise issues directly with the <a>Ombudspeople</a> as a <a href=
         "mailto:ombuds@w3.org">group</a> or <a href="https://www.w3.org/about/positive-work-environment/#Procedures">individually</a>. All
         complaints will be taken seriously and will receive a response.
       </p>