Offering Flowers Technique[]
You're writing everything very literally with poor grammar and spelling errors associated with it. The previous version easily summarizes the technique and you're adding a bunch of "fluff" that doesn't significantly improve the article in any way, shape, or form. If you strongly disagree with me, you're more then welcome to discuss with an admin or if not, look at the other jutsu/technique articles. I promise you that they follow the same format.
-Ventillate { About Me | Message | My Work }
21:09, 3 May 2021 (UTC)